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    ==The alarm== rings and ==you== hop out of bed<\/em>. ==Another day== is off and running<\/strong>. A quick shower<\/strong>.<\/p>\n

    Wake ==the kids== and rush ==them== through breakfast<\/em> so ==they== won\u2019t miss ==the bus==<\/em>.<\/p>\n

    Down ==a cup== of coffee<\/strong>. Shovel ==a bowl== of cornflakes<\/strong>.<\/p>\n

    Hurry ==out== to the car<\/em>, not forgetting ==a swift kiss== on your partner\u2019s cheek<\/strong>.<\/p>\n

    Hightail ==it== to the freeway<\/em>, making a mental note<\/em> to grab some takeout Thai<\/em> on the way home<\/strong>. (The kids\u2019 soccer practice starts at 6:15 sharp.)<\/p>\n

    Weave ==back and forth== looking for the fastest lane<\/em> while the radio deejay barks out the minutes<\/em> \u2014 8:33, 8:41, quarter to.<\/p>\n

    Reaching work<\/em>, ==you== sprint into ==the building== and leap up ==the stairs== three at a time<\/em>, arriving at your desk with seconds to spare<\/em>.<\/p>\n

    ==You== take ==a couple== of deep breaths<\/strong>, then remember ==that the project you didn\u2019t finish last night== must be sent to New York<\/em> by 10:00<\/em>.<\/p>\n

    Meanwhile, ==you==\u2019ve got ==five voice-mail messages and dozens more on e-mail==, ==six of them<\/strong> marked urgent==.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n

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    The alarm<\/strong> ringing, you jump up from the bed. A new day comes again. Take a quick shower.
    \nWake up kids, and urge them though the breakfast<\/strong> in case<\/strong> to miss the schoolbus.
    \nDrink off a cup of coffee. Gobble up<\/strong> a bowl of cornflakes.
    \nHurry up go outside to reach my car, not to forget to kiss parnter's cheek.
    \nQuickly drive car to freeway, and told myself to buy some takeaway on the way home in my mind.
    \nChangeing my line over and over again, hope to find the fastest line.
    \nOn arriving the place, you dash to the building, and go up stairs by three step once. while reach the desk, there is few seconds to nine clock.
    \nAfter take some deep breath, you remember the project which hasn't finished last night must sent to New York at 10:00.
    \nMeanwhile, you recive five voice message and dozens of<\/strong> e-mail, and six of them is marked by "urge".<\/p>\n

    \n

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    2. Take a quick shower.<\/strong>
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    3. Wake up kids, and urge them though the breakfast in case to miss the schoolbus.<\/strong>
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    4. Drink off a cup of coffee.<\/strong>
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    5. Gobble up a bowl of cornflakes.<\/strong>
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    6. Hurry up go outside to reach my car, not to forget to kiss parnter's cheek.<\/strong>
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    7. Quickly drive car to freeway, and told myself to buy some takeaway on the way home in my mind.<\/strong>
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    11. After take some deep breath, you remember the project which hasn't finished last night must sent to New York at 10:00.<\/strong>
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